Very good and well presented. A couple of points: 1. 'intertextualises' is not quite clear in convention 1. What you need to explain is that you have adopted a style similar to Vogue, but with a focus on MUSIC, because of the similarities of your target audience. Ask me to explain further about intertextuality. 2. 'colour/tones of feminism' - do you mean of femininity? They are rather different concepts! 3. 'Bleed' again this is not quite the right term to descibe the layering of images so that they cover mastheads. Bleed refers to when images go across print margins. It would be best just to explain what you mean without using the word. 4. It might be a good idea in general to give the TITLE of each of your slides BEFORE we see the images - this would prepare us for what we are looking at. You could simply insert slides with the title only. Otherise this ie excellent.
...also you mention 'craziness' and an 'individualist' psychographic profile. But to me your products connote sophistication and aspiration rather than craziness and individualism...
Very good and well presented. A couple of points:
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2. 'colour/tones of feminism' - do you mean of femininity? They are rather different concepts!
3. 'Bleed' again this is not quite the right term to descibe the layering of images so that they cover mastheads. Bleed refers to when images go across print margins. It would be best just to explain what you mean without using the word.
4. It might be a good idea in general to give the TITLE of each of your slides BEFORE we see the images - this would prepare us for what we are looking at. You could simply insert slides with the title only.
Otherise this ie excellent.
...also you mention 'craziness' and an 'individualist' psychographic profile. But to me your products connote sophistication and aspiration rather than craziness and individualism...
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