Another strong answer. I really like your use of Dyer's star system theory. There are one or two ways you could improve this, mainly to do with presentation. You have a section devoted to language, but in the slide before it you discuss alliteration etc. Birng that discussion together. You discuss your colour scheme twice - merge these into one area. Also you use a colloquial expressing in quite a few of your answers when you say 'being that my audience like...' and similar phrases. Instead of 'being that', you should write 'since' or 'because' to be more formal. Othwerise excellent again.
Another strong answer. I really like your use of Dyer's star system theory. There are one or two ways you could improve this, mainly to do with presentation. You have a section devoted to language, but in the slide before it you discuss alliteration etc. Birng that discussion together. You discuss your colour scheme twice - merge these into one area. Also you use a colloquial expressing in quite a few of your answers when you say 'being that my audience like...' and similar phrases. Instead of 'being that', you should write 'since' or 'because' to be more formal.
ReplyDeleteOthwerise excellent again.